Writing Test Update

I made a little mistake it was I wrote a narrative instead of a explanation. This is what i'm good at my Ideas, organisation, vocabulary, punctuation and spelling but I need to work on my structure and sentence and that is my writing test pdate

Zip's Cool Invention

I have been reading Zip's Cool Invention. We had to make an invention to keep us cool. Here is the fan I made.

A tree horse

Clare lived on a farm. Clare’s friend Abby came to stay with her for a few days. Clare and Abby went to play they found a tree. Clare and  Abby went on it Clear said this is just like a horse. Clare went to get a rope and Abby went to get an old towel.Abby put the old towel on the brunch and Clare put the rope on the small brunch. Clare and Abby lot’s of fun to getter.