At the Beach
Once upon a time there was a little boy and girl called Hansel and Gretel. They went to the beach. There were lots of poisonous trees.
The sand was golden and the water was blue.
There was a shark and a stingray. There were lots of fish too. Hansel and Gretel looked into the water. Then a shark jumped up and bit Hansel on the leg. Gretel moved back and called the ambulance but there was a witch flying on a broomstick. She had a wand and she waved it at Gretel. Luckily the cops came and shot the witch and they lived happily ever after.
Wow what an adventure your story is Pou! It was action packed with witches, sharks, ambulances and all sorts of exciting things happening. Keep up the good writing.
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